For a smile as wide as a country sunrise
This Is You
The melody of a singing bird,
After it arrives in spring,
A most pleasant sound that I have heard,
Truly moves my heart to shout and sing.
The fragile wings of a butterfly,
Cheerful colors going here and there,
Flower to flower, not asking why,
And floating so lightly through the air.
The soft gurgling of a country stream,
It’s refreshing water, clear and cool,
Sunlight drifting like a summer dream,
Ducks swimming ’round in a little pool.
Soft petals of a beautiful rose,
So rich, can other flowers compare?
But though there be so many of those,
Your beauty outshines, so lovely, so rare.
Β© 2019 Steve McLeod.
So nice…beautiful writing..love it ππ
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Thank you so very much for your encouraging words Shubham! Enjoy your day/night!π
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That’s Beautiful Steve!
Thank You! I am so glad you shared.
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Thanks for that RJ! Your encouragement is much appreciated. Hope you get rested quickly.ππΊ
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Are you sure?;-)
I will! Thanks!
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Of course I’m sure. I think. Maybe. Sometimes. I didn’t know your name was Will?
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Nice Try! I’m still full from last night’s crow! Maybe tomorrow!
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See ya tomorrow, I’m signing off anyway.
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Ok, until then…
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Same here!
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It is beautiful. Your poems makes me feel like I am looking at the pictures. ππ»
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Wow, thank you Margo for such a wonderful comment! I hope you day is starting off great!ππΊ
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I agree. Itβs a beautiful masterpiece.
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So lovely!
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Thank you Lydia! I hope you have a great day!ππΊ
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Muy bueno tu poema. La verdad que se disfruta de principio a fin. Saludos.
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Very good your poem. The truth is enjoyed from beginning to end. Greetings.
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Thank you so much for your kind words Mac! Much appreciated, I hope you have a great day!
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Well done! Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you so much for reading and for your kind comment! I hope you have a great day!π
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Thank you so much NZ! Have a great day!πππΊ
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Good morning, Steve and Muffin! Your confidence in your poetry is growing. Good! Does Muffin also like to make poems? π
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Good morning NZ! Yes, good comments are helping, thanks so much! Hmm, Muffin write a poem? Not a bad idea, I should ask her.ππΉπ
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Oh yes, please do! π writing poetry is difficult. Itβs different from regular writing. And there are sooo many types of poems too! Iβm not so good at rhyming. But thatβs ok. Itβs therapy for me.
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Poems don’t need to rhyme, I think most poems don’t actually. I have a harder time writing without rhyming, just doesn’t come out right for me, maybe with practice. It is good therapy for sure. Enjoy!ππΈ
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Steve this is absolutely beautifully written! So expressive, great vivid imagery.
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Thank you so very much for such a wonderful comment Yonnie! I hope you will have a great day!πππΊ
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Steve you are very welcome You have a great day as well. Enjoy your day! You too Muffin π
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Thanks Yonnie! Muffin meows thanks too.ππΈπ
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I loved the tranquil rhythm to this. Very beautiful. βΊοΈπ
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Thank you very much Peregrine for such encouraging words! Hope you day is a good one!πππΊKer-Kaw!
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Yes, I agree
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Her beauty outshines then all! Wonderful poem! β€οΈit!
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Thank you so much for reading and such a nice comment Renee! Hope your day is great!πππΊ
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You are welcome! It was a lovely poemπ Iβm having a great Memorial Day! Hope your day is wonderful, as wellπΈ
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It is a great day so far and it will continue to be I’m sure, sunny and fairly warm, a great day for pictures! Thanks again.πππ·
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Sounds lovely! Itβs hot here! π π¦ But a great day! Especially for pics!
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I don’t know if we will get any real hot weather this summer, long range forecast is for cooler than normal temps all summer. Terrible thought really!ππ·
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I canβt even imagine!!! ππΏ
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Wow… just wow… Steve… This was so beautiful… I haven’t landed yet, I can read your poem again and again and again.
You know that butterflies mean something special to me and my soul felt at home. I bathe in your words Steve, I fly in your words Steve, I will live in this poem like a butterfly and never lose me Steve…(and Muffin)
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Thank you so much for sharing.
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Thanks for reading this Lillian and thanks so much for your wonderful comment!! It took me a bit to figure out what to say after reading such an amazing comment and it truly makes me feel good to know it impacted you in such a way. Your words are very encouraging to me and I treasure them for sure. Thank you again and I hope your day is going well indeed!πππΊ
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Wow, you didπ¦thank you, but it is words from my heart. It was so lovely.
You made my day after a little bit though beginning, thank you Steve.
Enjoy your day.
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I’m glad your day could be made a little better and I hope your afternoon will keep getting better with more sunshine for you!πππΊ
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Thank you Steveπ¦I hope you make you a great day. I make me a cup og coffe now, taste good, and my mind will rest a bit.
Enjoy.
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That’s a good idea, time for my second cup of coffee! And then get started on my post for today. Enjoy your coffee and relaxing!ππΊ
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beautiful words for a very beautiful scene and images π another great poem! Hope you’ll be having a great day π
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Good morning Huguette! Thank you for such a nice comment on my poem! Nice start to the day and hope yours is going well also!ππ
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Good morning Steve and hope you will have a great day ahead ππ A regular working day here, nothing much π π
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Nice sunny morning here, very cool to start but the temp is rising fast, maybe I can get some nice pics today.ππ·π
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This is great ππΈ hope you will have plenty of good pictures today ππ
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Thanks!ππ·π
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Thanks for reading Tiffany and your nice comment! Enjoy your day!ππΈ
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Same to you
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Thanks Tiffany.π
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Lovely words, wonderful photo!β€οΈ
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Thank you so very much for reading and for your comment! Have a great day!π
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Good poem. Have you been writing poetry for a while? This poem reflects what is you love: nature.
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Hi again Benjamin, another comment that went to spam! Thanks so much for reading! Yes, I started writing poetry when I was a kid actually, then I stopped for quite a while because everyone was telling me my poems were not good. Then I started again last year but wasn’t planning to share any, but a couple of my follower friends encouraged me to post them so I decided to try and have been getting good comments about them so I will continue to share them now and then. I hope you have a wonderful weekend!ππΊ
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Good! Donβt worry about others.
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Thanks Benjamin, enjoy your day!
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Beautiful!
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Thanks Stu!π
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My pleasure!
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