The Investigators, Inc. The Missing Relative Case. Chapter 16. Changes.

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  1. It is hard to see so many loose ends, at the end of this case. But if Steve is more cooperative with the team and takes better care of himself, things will go better. The team is bigger and seems to be helping each other. Christopher is sure to resurface. Shark’s family still is out there and are sure to attack again. There were certainly many who were injured. Glad they are recovering. Just one question, why did you say no more cats now and then head for the favorite cat shelter? It does not make sense. You might want to change this. The story was good and packed with action.

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    • Yes, we were not quite able to finish things, but not every case can be won completely. We did do quite well and we will find out more about Bertha and her daughters coming up. Mainly due to Brook and a budding romance with Miles. Yes, Christopher will be back, he just needs time to rebuild his gang. He was knocked down too much in gang strength to try and fight us right now. I’m not sure who will be the most dangerous, him or Shark’s relatives? Oh, I can’t change that last part about the cats. Remember, I’m trying to deal with that stubbornness. I said no, then gave in, which shows I’m learning a bit. Hopefully.🤔👩😺🐈🐈🕵️‍♂️

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      • I changed the ending slightly to hopefully make it a bit more plain. Sometimes I think one thing but forget my readers may not think the same way. Thanks for pointing that out.
        Shark’s relatives might be a more immediate threat. It is amazing what they managed to accomplish with so few men involved. A wake up call to us. We might be relying too much on our numbers, but we still need to do things intelligently. Christopher will become a problem and we must prepare for that possibility too. But we are going to be jolted by something we are not prepared for, and very soon. An old foe returns in our next case entitled, “The Case of Carole Ann’s Return”.🤔👩😾🕵️‍♂️

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      • Glad you changed the ending slightly. It really helps to clarify things. I am sure that Shark’s relatives will return soon. So important to be united , communicative, and awake and aware of danger, with the whole team.

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      • Yes, we need to be watchful right now, too many enemies around with Shark’s relatives, Christopher, Lauren and Majori, and now an old foe returns. Hopefully we spot her before she does her damage.🤔🕵️‍♂️

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      • Yes, if everyone is awake and aware of small details that can point to danger, your team will do better. It is hard to surprise a team that is united. You do have quite a list of enemies, so it is important to be alert.

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      • Yes, I am going to let Kat and Jennifer teach that to the girls, being aware of those small details. I will get Alfred teach the guys, he is good with those small details as well. And we do need to find another doctor to help Kerstina.🤔🕵️‍♂️

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      • Jennifer and Kat will be great teachers for the girls, they are always alert! Alfred will do a great job with the guys, who will have to also practice working as a team together.

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      • Yep, we do good in some areas, but other areas we definitely need to have some refresher courses so we have a good close knit team, not a bunch of solo soldiers. We will get it right soon and have the best team around.🤔🕵️‍♂️

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      • Hey there! I noticed you have not read the first chapters of my new story. So I just wanted to check and see if you are feeling well. Have a nice evening!

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      • Thank you, Steve. The weekend will be good. We had a long time of very frigid temperatures down to -57 F or -49.44 C for about 2-3 weeks. It has warmed up a bit and it is such a relief. It is below freezing but feels so warm! Although it is still fairly dark, we are gaining daylight! Praise God! Winters in the Far North can be very brutal.

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      • Yes, your winters are worse than ours for sure. This winter has been amazing for us. Last week it was raining and we had no snow. Now we have 4 inches of snow and colder, but not bad, down to -5 to -10F at night and up to 10F during the day. Sure can’t complain.

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      • Yes, fairly warm. When it gets super cold, the cold creeps inside and machinery needs more care. The cold does draw the community together and everyone will help someone in distress. Blessings!

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