For a smile as wide as a country sunrise
It didn’t take long to reach the old castle. We stood and looked at it from the outside before entering through the gate which was just an open spot in the wall now. Inside we could see that close to half of the castle had fallen down or was deliberately broken down, but a long time ago. If the treasure was hidden in that part it will never be found, I said. The part that was standing was in remarkably good condition, what a contrast to the other side. We walked around inside the castle for a bit, then we noticed an area on the broken side where people had uncovered a doorway so we went over to look more closely. There was steps going down so we followed them. Meow!=I hope we find secret passage! Meow, meow?!=Are you crazy? Not want secret passage, always get stuck in those and hard to find way out.
Meow.=Not need to worry Muffin, I here with you this time. And he wrapped his tail around her. How cute, said Kathy. At the bottom of the stairs the passage turned to the right and…stopped. There had been a cave in, obviously a long time ago. Mr. Cat was a bit disappointed but I reminded him there was much more to explore. Off we went to one of the buildings. Meow, meow.=Someone watching us, I can tell, but not see anyone. Mr. Cat looks around too. Meow.=Yep, I feel it too. Maybe we should go back, said Kathy. I keep forgetting she can understand the cats. Meow, meow!=Good idea, we go back, we pack, we go home, go someplace else for vacation. No, we’re not leaving for home just yet. And stop sighing. Let’s keep looking around, but keep an eye open for danger too.
Nothing in that building at all, but oddly there was a lot of dirt on the main floor. Muffin and Mr. Cat were sniffing around when, meow, meow!=Over here! What did you find Muffin? It’s an old iron trap door in the floor, quite small, maybe big enough for a person to go through. But it appeared to be locked, which is odd. No lock on this side so it must be locked on the other side. Maybe there is another way in there, I said. Meow.=Give me that thin pick thing you have. So I did. Mr. Cat held it in his mouth and poked around a bit and I heard a click. The door opened easily. How did you learn that?, I asked. No, wait, don’t tell me, I don’t want to know. I aimed my flashlight down the ladder that was there but I couldn’t really see much, but it did go down quite deep. I decided to go take a look but left the others up top in case I ran into a problem.
I started down and Mr. Cat jumped on my head. Meow.=Want to explore too. Must you sit on my head? Meow.=I not mind, it good spot. Thanks. Meow.=Welcome. So down we go to the bottom where there is a nice passage that went about 20 feet and…stopped. Another old cave in blocked that passage also. Well, nowhere else to go so we went back. When we got to the ladder I looked up but the door was shut. Kathy and Muffin are playing a game, I said. Meow.=Not funny game, if they shut door it lock again, they not be able to open. I look at Mr. Cat. You just had to say that. Up we go with Mr. Cat on my head again. Sure enough, the door was shut tight and locked. I yelled, but no answer. I’m sure they would be able to hear me, I said. Meow?=That not good, remember someone watch us? Yes, I remember that. Mr. Cat keeps looking at the lock. Unfortunately I had to leave my backpack behind since this part with the ladder was just too small. Sigh.
Meow?=You have small knife? Yep, that I do. Meow.=Push in this little spot here. I did but nothing happened. Meow.=Bend knife blade, try again. What? This is a nice little knife. Meow?=You want to stay in here? Sigh. I stuck the blade in the crack around the door and bent it, then pushed it in the spot again and…click, the door was open and out we came. But no one was there. My backpack and Kathy’s backpack were still there, but no Muffin and Kathy. I called out to them, so did Mr. Cat, but nothing. We looked around but found no sign of them anywhere. The only thing to do is go back to the hotel I guess, maybe they went back to get help after closing the door. Meow.=Someone still watching us. I don’t like that, I said. We got back to the hotel quickly and there they were lying on Kathy’s bed sleeping, or more likely drugged. It took a bit but we were finally able to wake them up. But they couldn’t remember what happened or how they got back.
To Be Continued.
Β©2020 Steve McLeod.
AWESOME CHAPTER STEVE!!!
Yayyyyyy I’M FIRST!!
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Hmmmm noooooooo you are NOT first!!!!!!!!!!! He just posted and you didn’t have time to read the first paragraph!!!!!!
I’m gonna read it now and comment like a good girl. You should do the same.
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It came out earlier where she lives.
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No. I don’t believe that. Unless you send it to her because you want her to win, then no. Nope. Not possible. Noooooooo.
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Delayed posting so different areas get it about the same time.
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But can’t you be the referee from now on? I know it’s easy to post and then run away knowing all your followers are attacking/racing to see who’s first, but we need someone to actually truthfully judge the competition.
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It’s easy to tell who’s first, it’s the first one on the list of comments. How else can I tell?π€π
I think there is only 3 of you in the contest, you, Eshal, Maryam.π€
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No. People can cheat.
Actually no, there’s more, just not all as crazy as me.
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Really?π²
Really?π€
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YES!
And yes!
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Not nice.π³π
Can’t be.π€π€ͺ
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I forgot what we were talking about.
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Are you sure we’re talking? Maybe we just think we are. Or maybe we’re talking to someone else? Or maybe I’m sleep typing? I wonder if people can do that?π€
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Uhhh well, we were talking.
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But maybe we were dreaming we were talking and now you’re awake and that’s why you can’t remember what we were talking about because what we were talking about was actually in a dream about talking what we were talking about but not really talking what we were talking about at all.π΅π΅
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Hey! Don’t be saying that!!!! You’re making me tired!! And no. I didn’t just wake up.
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Then maybe it was me that woke up and that’s why you can’t remember because it was my dream we were talking in so how could you remember now that I woke up. I think.π€π€ͺ
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Ooooooooooh this is funny…. I reply each time after 7 minutes. 7 is the number of completion. Funny I keep doing that!π
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I think I missed the joke. But it’s good anyway!ππΉπ
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13 minutes this time.
Okay, I’m outta here. So tired.
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Nu-uh! I am promising! I never comment before i read the post! Promise!!!
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I don’t believe that. I’m sorry, but I aint falling for that.
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No Lydia seriously!!
I am really really really telling the truth!
Well if you ain’t believing it then I’m not gonna spend time making you believe!πππ
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C’mon!
For the first time in your life trust me!
Of this was a prank I wouldn’t have taken it so far!
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π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£
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I believe you. So does Muffin. So does Mr. Cat.
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THANK GOD!!! I knew Muffin and Mr. cat would!
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I believe you even if she doesn’t.
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THANKS Steve!
At least some one does!
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Yep.
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Thank you so much Eshal!
Yes, you are first!π₯³π€ΈββοΈπ₯
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No prob Steve!
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So many hidden things! Who is watching you?
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Yes, that’s what I would like to know, and why?π€πΎπΎπ΅οΈββοΈπ
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Itβs a given that you are being watched ! How did they get drugged ? By the way, the pics are great ! βοΈβοΈπΌππ΅οΈββοΈπ€π·
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It is? Oh my, I must pay more attention. That’s a good question, how did they? They don’t remember anything, however…maybe next chapter we will find out something. Or not.
Thanks! Nina comes up with some good pics of Mr. Cat!ππΈπΈπ΅οΈββοΈπ
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Oh no…you should pay more attention to the cats when they say you’re being watched π
Luckily Mr Cat has teach you a trick and you’ve managed to get out! And luckily Muffin and the mysterious Kathy are ok π
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Yes, we are okay, but who was watching us, and why? And what really happened to Muffin and Kathy? I know Kathy, I think, though I’m beginning to wonder if it really is her or maybe…
Guess we will find out.π³πππ΅οΈββοΈπ
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Sorry I am late Steveπππ But I can’t spend alot of time on WordPress because I am sooo busy with online classesπππ
Anyway awesome chapterπππ
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Good for you, glad you are enjoying your online classes!ππ³
Thanks so much!ππΈπΈπ΅οΈββοΈπ
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no problem Steve!!!!
no i am not!!!!! its pure torture!!!!
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Really?π€ I thought that would be lots of fun!ππΉ
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You will because your a grown up!!!
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Minor detail.
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You should make the cats leader of the group! Haha π
I’m stuck between giggling over Mr. Cat’s sweetness to Muffin and the excitement for the story. Romance and mystery… just perfect. Mr. Cat I’m a fan!
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What?π² Replace me?π³π€ͺ
Meow!=Yay, I got fan! Um, Muffin, what is fan?πΊ
Meow, meow=Fan is someone that like you a lot.πΊ
Meow.=Oh, that good, yay, I got fan!πΈ
Glad you are enjoying it Jessica! But I think danger awaits,π¬ who is watching us and why?π³ Who is Kathy?π€ Where’s my coffee?πβ
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I can give you all the coffee in my house and who cares who’s watching you? Of course I’m enjoying. It’s my job as a reader π
For a second I thought Muffin will say electric fan π
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Coffee? I’m on my way!πββοΈπββοΈπββοΈπββοΈπββοΈ
Yep, I thought she would say that too, she surprises me sometimes.ππΉ
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I burst out laughing at that first sentence with those runners πππ
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Hey, glad I made you laugh! Whenever you need a laugh, you should just look at a pic of me, that’ll do it every time!πππΉ
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Thanks Steve I’ll keep that in mind π
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I’m just now reading this.ππππI wonder how that happened.π€π€
Anyway, this was an amazing chapter.ππ
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Thanks so much Lydia! Who is watching us and why?π³ Is Kathy who she says she is?π€ Where is my coffee?πβ
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Yep, no doubt you’re being watched! And what’s the deal with Kathy? I hope Muffin is okay and it’s a good thing Mr. Cat is around, even if he is sitting on your head! π€£βοΈβοΈ
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What’s with Kathy? No idea. She was in one of my other stories, although Kathy wasn’t. But what happened to Muffin and Kathy? I think Mr. Cat learned that from Muffin. Sigh.ππΈπΈπ΅οΈββοΈπ
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