The Investigators, Inc. The Black House Mystery. Chapter 12. Treasure.

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  1. Your new sisters are very resourceful, great fighters, and good at finding treasure. The White Cowboys and Black Jackets are gone for the moment but we are sure to hear from them again. Were the couple in your bedroom really acting independently or were they plants by someone else? Maybe we will learn more in the next story.

    Steve, you really should see about publishing these as books using your blog to launch them.

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    • Yes, they are! And a bit sneaky too perhaps. Well, with Katresa, Amerie and Suzette, that gives me 3 sisters. But can I leave out the other 3 girls? I think that’s why Jennifer said my answer to Suzette’s question of being my sister, should be interesting. Sigh. Still, having several sisters may not be so bad. They will be amazing on the team.

      The White Cowboys still had some members, so they may be back. I think someone was backing them as well, just like Liana. Perhaps the same person that is attacking Mandar. I think the two ghosts were independent, just hopeful to get rich quick. A million dollars is nice, but in today’s world it can disappear rather quickly.

      I think we have a major new enemy out there that wants to destroy us. Toledo still has two cousins that we haven’t met, but it could be someone else. We have gotten big as an organization and that means a problem for large criminal organizations which might want to stop us. Our next case might prove quite interesting, though not in a good sense.🤔👩😼🕵️‍♂️

      I have been working on some rewriting of the beginning, to make them work along better. Takes time unfortunately, and my health over this past year has just not been good, so that has slowed me down on this project. And my blog is nearly gone, I have only about 10 to 12 regular readers now compared to over 100 at my peak. So promoting my book would be harder now. However, I would still like to do it. I’m not sure if I should include my first year or not though, but those stories were very popular with people so maybe I should. I’m hoping to have the first book ready this winter. It will just depend on my health more than anything. Thanks so much for your interest and encouragement in this!😊🕵️‍♂️

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      • Yes, you will have plenty of sisters.

        Pray your health improves so you can complete your first book. The stories were good but there was much left to the readers’ imaginations. The China plates that were gold and the later meeting with Rosanna. You put much work into them and they should get published. As far as readers go, you never know for sure. I now have your blog popping up on my bell notifications and have the whole post on it. Does this get counted? I do not know. My readership has gone down much since WordPress banned me from losing likes. Writing comments for every blog takes too much time. However, I have thousands getting emails and the stats tell me if they are opened. This does not include visits to your site. WordPress is not as friendly but I believe you have more readers than you know. My posts get reposted without notice which adds to the readership. Your posts are posted on the reader under your tags so that is more readers. My readership has dropped but I still know there are more readers than the statistics may indicate. You should pursue your publishing dream. You have already done the hard work. You have a passion for writing and there are readers out there for your book.

        You’re welcome!

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      • Yes, the early stories were much shorter so there was little room for details. Writing for a blog is sometimes different than writing for a book. People here often want things short or they give up reading. And some things need to be left unsaid until the right time, like the gold plates. There was a hint about them near to the beginning, about them being heavy, I believe, might have to look at that again to be sure. I have read lots of mystery novels and many mystery movies where certain things were not mentioned except briefly. That makes the reader think about possibilities a bit more to get them engaged. At least that was the idea. But I admit in those early ones a lot was left out since chapters were only about half the length of the ones now. So some rewriting is necessary, which unfortunately slows things down a bit. Please keep up with the engagement and ideas, it really helps me! Thanks!😊🕵️‍♂️

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