This Is You…A Poem.

This Is You

The melody of a singing bird,

After it arrives in spring,

A most pleasant sound that I have heard,

Truly moves my heart to shout and sing.

The fragile wings of a butterfly,

Cheerful colors going here and there,

Flower to flower, not asking why,

And floating so lightly through the air.

The soft gurgling of a country stream,

It’s refreshing water, clear and cool,

Sunlight drifting like a summer dream,

Ducks swimming ’round in a little pool.

Soft petals of a beautiful rose,

So rich, can other flowers compare?

But though there be so many of those,

Your beauty outshines, so lovely, so rare.

Β© 2019 Steve McLeod.

70 Comments on “This Is You…A Poem.

      • Good morning NZ! Yes, good comments are helping, thanks so much! Hmm, Muffin write a poem? Not a bad idea, I should ask her.πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ΉπŸ˜€

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      • Oh yes, please do! πŸ‘ writing poetry is difficult. It’s different from regular writing. And there are sooo many types of poems too! I’m not so good at rhyming. But that’s ok. It’s therapy for me.

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      • Poems don’t need to rhyme, I think most poems don’t actually. I have a harder time writing without rhyming, just doesn’t come out right for me, maybe with practice. It is good therapy for sure. Enjoy!πŸ˜„πŸ˜Έ

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  1. Wow… just wow… Steve… This was so beautiful… I haven’t landed yet, I can read your poem again and again and again.

    You know that butterflies mean something special to me and my soul felt at home. I bathe in your words Steve, I fly in your words Steve, I will live in this poem like a butterfly and never lose me Steve…(and Muffin)
    πŸ¦‹
    Thank you so much for sharing.

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    • Thanks for reading this Lillian and thanks so much for your wonderful comment!! It took me a bit to figure out what to say after reading such an amazing comment and it truly makes me feel good to know it impacted you in such a way. Your words are very encouraging to me and I treasure them for sure. Thank you again and I hope your day is going well indeed!πŸ˜ƒπŸŒžπŸ˜Ί

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      • Wow, you didπŸ¦‹thank you, but it is words from my heart. It was so lovely.
        You made my day after a little bit though beginning, thank you Steve.
        Enjoy your day.

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      • I’m glad your day could be made a little better and I hope your afternoon will keep getting better with more sunshine for you!πŸ˜ƒπŸŒžπŸ˜Ί

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      • Thank you SteveπŸ¦‹I hope you make you a great day. I make me a cup og coffe now, taste good, and my mind will rest a bit.
        Enjoy.

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      • That’s a good idea, time for my second cup of coffee! And then get started on my post for today. Enjoy your coffee and relaxing!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Ί

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    • Hi again Benjamin, another comment that went to spam! Thanks so much for reading! Yes, I started writing poetry when I was a kid actually, then I stopped for quite a while because everyone was telling me my poems were not good. Then I started again last year but wasn’t planning to share any, but a couple of my follower friends encouraged me to post them so I decided to try and have been getting good comments about them so I will continue to share them now and then. I hope you have a wonderful weekend!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Ί

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